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Vanish into The Darkness
Vanish into The Darkness
Lone_Wolf


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Challenge: Vanishing Point II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot A630
Location: Malta - Ghar Hasan
Date: May 9, 2007
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Still Life, Architecture
Date Uploaded: May 9, 2007

 even though it don`t think it matches perfectly with the title.. here it goes..

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 05/25/2007 11:29:18 PM
Hello from the Critique Club

First Reaction

Needs better lighting

Technically
A little out of focus and too much light on the top and nothing to draw you into the cave.

Composition
Interesting idea and setup

Meets the Challenge
No, nothing vanishing here.

You should go back and retake the picture again, get a better focus, try different angles and lighting. This could be a very interesting picture.

Thanks for allowing me to critique your photo.

Keep shooting and have fun.

Karen
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/22/2007 09:14:03 PM
dont understand
 05/20/2007 07:04:02 PM
Needs sharpness and a bit more something ... the concept is a good one and I don't know if flash would have helped or not.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/19/2007 12:21:36 PM
no parallel lines converging, not really vanishing point.
 05/18/2007 06:37:23 PM
The "point" is hard to discern here. It's an interesting photo otherwise.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/17/2007 12:34:37 PM
Out of focus. Blurred.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/16/2007 11:08:50 PM
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 05/16/2007 01:14:36 PM
Interesting interpretation of the challenge; nice to see something different (I did one of the interminable train-track shots).

I think the lighting lets you down pretty seriously here, and ends up leaving a pretty snapshottish effect; it's just pretty flat - I can't tell if you used on-camera flash or (I suspect) natural lighting but either way it's from directly behind you, so you lose the texture. The dramatic cave shots I think of tend to have several lights hidden in the foreground to accentuate the shapes in the cave.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/16/2007 12:02:03 PM
not sharp


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