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05/17/2007 03:24:59 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: I think that you overexposed this one just a bit. The white on the vehicle, as well as the pants and the lady's nose look a little hot to me. I think that taking the exposure down just a touch would have also added a more dramatic feel to the image.
Lighting: As I mentioned above, a little too bright. The brightness of the image makes a bit difficult to look at. This is a tough one to manage the light to begin with. The bright sun on the white, along with the harsh white of the vehicle makes it really hard.
Composition/Content: I do like your content, but perhaps not for this challenge.
My Opinion: I think that this one would have been better for a different challenge. Nice work, and I look forward to much more of your work.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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05/15/2007 11:55:40 AM |
| Very real Shot, quite and impact (pardon the pun) |
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05/14/2007 06:50:21 PM |
| Interesting but not related to the challenge as I don't think an accident is really a cultural event per se. |
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05/14/2007 10:58:26 AM |
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05/12/2007 07:45:05 AM |
| Am I missing something, but quite a few entries in this Challenge are not related to Cultural Events. This shot is very traumatic, but not "Cultural" to my mind. |
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05/11/2007 07:00:19 PM |
| i like the title. there is something odd in this picture. it looks like these is someone behind the woman but i can only see the lower part of his body. interesting capture. |
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05/11/2007 04:39:18 AM |
I think this shot captures the anguish of this event in the ladies face. It is a big part of today’s culture, other’s here on DPC may not see it that way regrettably. = 9
I think a little less contrast to take away the glare may improve this image |
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05/11/2007 03:24:17 AM |
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05/10/2007 05:49:51 PM |
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05/10/2007 04:06:23 PM |
| What does this have to do with cultural events? |
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05/10/2007 10:17:29 AM |
Based on this forum thread ==> Photographer's comments during challenge voting
...and this comment:
 onejumpjohnny - \"I just voted on a challenge piece which clearly (and very effectively)represented a crash scene. Since I find this genre personally upsetting, I left comments based upon the face value of the shot (and justifying my low score vote!) Little did I know at the time it was a \"staged\" activity set at a local high school for educational purposes.\"
I wanted to see if I was able to accurately identify the photo being referenced. I'll have to come back after the challenge has finished voting to find out. :D
BTW - Good luck in the challenge. |
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05/10/2007 09:46:38 AM |
| technically you've captured a fine journalistic piece, nice color, nicely composed and conceived (very sorry for the misconception on my part!) |
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05/10/2007 12:39:02 AM |
I think people on here to see more reality!
Great shot. |
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05/09/2007 10:02:47 PM |
| I'm not sure a car crash qualifies as a cultural event. There's good composition here between the car and the lady. She's out of focus though putting too much emphasis on the car. |
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05/09/2007 01:23:42 PM |
| Whether or not you get offended by images such as this is a highly subjective thing, and in this instance I am not sure you have acted with consideration to the unfortunate woman in the shot. Irrespective of this, I can't see how this relates to the theme of Cultural Events. |
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05/09/2007 12:53:53 PM |
| A bit of a stretch for the challenge, I think. I mean, I doubt they called the insurance company and said that they were involved in a tragic cultural event... :) |
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05/09/2007 10:15:58 AM |
| this seems like a snapshot ... also, IMHO, doesn't fit the challenge |
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05/09/2007 09:03:59 AM |
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05/09/2007 08:31:59 AM |
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