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05/17/2007 03:00:06 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: While not nearly the superiority of much of your work, the technical aspects of this image is pretty strong. I like the crisp, clean focus on the player, and the depth of field makes this one pop nicely.
Lighting: I think that your lighting is reversed. The background is a little too bright, thus making the subject look a little too dark.
Composition/Content: The background is a bit too busy for my liking. I'd like to see it with out the outfielder and the passing truck on the left side. I do like the inclusion of the ball, as well as the entire form of the player.
My Opinion: Even with the mild flaws, this is a nice image. Again, not nearly the strength of the work you normally produce, but still pretty nice.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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05/16/2007 02:27:03 AM |
| You beat the heck out of your prediction and I do think it's an interesting angle AND shows action - the presence of the ball in the frame is perfect for that. Best part, though, is the determination on his face - very nicely timed and captured! |
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05/15/2007 08:21:34 PM |
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05/14/2007 05:02:27 PM |
| Very nice picture, with good motion, and a nice blurry background |
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05/14/2007 02:08:35 AM |
| The best one I have seen so far. A 10. I know how much timing it takes to get a photo like this. Good job. |
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05/10/2007 06:20:23 PM |
| Great action, clarity and perspective. Fantastic! |
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05/10/2007 10:49:24 AM |
| Great! Has everything. Woo-hoo |
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05/09/2007 08:06:36 PM |
| Great composition, it almost looks posed but then you see the player in the background and you realize this was no one shot wonder. |
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05/09/2007 07:53:26 PM |
| With that look I would hope so.... |
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05/09/2007 11:45:17 AM |
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05/09/2007 09:23:28 AM |
| Terrific shot. Definitely fulfilled this weeks challenge to the T! |
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