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Learning to swim
Learning to swim
kiskat


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Sports III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Pentax K100D
Lens: Sigma 28-200mm f/3.5-5.6 Compact Hyperzoom Aspherical for Pentax
Location: Tempe, AZ
Date: May 7, 2007
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 125
Galleries: Sports, Children
Date Uploaded: May 8, 2007

 My daughter in the pool.
It was a nice afternoon, natural lighting.

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Place: 133 out of 230
Avg (all users): 5.4238
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
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Views since voting: 848
Views during voting: 283
Votes: 210
Comments: 7
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AuthorThread
 05/17/2007 03:45:56 AM
Thanks for the critique. I agree with all of your points. This is not the kind of picture you can carefully set up. Either you get luck and everything perfect, or not. I took about 30 pictures, this was the best.
Maybe next time.

Gyula

Originally posted by khdoss:
Hello from the Critique Club

First Reaction nice colors.

Technically
Good lighting, nice skin tones, great colors, not sure where your focus was, nothing seems sharp, except for her arm.

Composition is ok, I know that the hand on the nose is part of learning how to swim but I would like to see a little more of her face.
The splash at the bottom is nice.

Thanks for allowing me to critique your photo.


Karen
05/17/2007 01:05:30 AM
Hello from the Critique Club

First Reaction nice colors.

Technically
Good lighting, nice skin tones, great colors, not sure where your focus was, nothing seems sharp, except for her arm.

Composition is ok, I know that the hand on the nose is part of learning how to swim but I would like to see a little more of her face.
The splash at the bottom is nice.

Thanks for allowing me to critique your photo.

Keep shooting and have fun.

Karen
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/15/2007 04:07:06 PM
Wonderful capture, great clarity and colors.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/12/2007 03:27:27 AM
I would like to see the body and splash in focus
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/10/2007 08:54:11 AM
sad
 05/09/2007 04:15:02 PM
These are such nice colours. Really nice light. The water looks great and I like how you've shown another aspect of sport. Well done.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/09/2007 12:39:00 AM
i know the girl is holding her nose, but you can hardly seed her face!
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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