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05/18/2007 12:23:04 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hi Rath,
Welcome to DPC, and congratulations on your first submission. I hope you are not too discouraged from your first showing, and stay involved with the site - it really is the best place to learn.
I think you have had a lot of useful feedback already. Many people didn't feel that you had met the challenge (in their eyes at any rate). I cannot over-emphasise how important it is on this site to clearly meet the challenge. Many also found the image too out of focus. one of the reasons for this is the difficult lighting that you were working under - it would have been much easier with more light.
Please do take the time to mark the helpful comments you have recieved as helpful, to show your appreciation to the commenters.
It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.
Cheers
Paul |
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05/15/2007 04:42:25 AM |
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05/14/2007 11:01:17 AM |
| out of focus and whats the point? cultural events.... enough said. |
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05/13/2007 01:36:51 AM |
| Out of focus and a real stretch for the theme |
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05/12/2007 04:02:02 PM |
| Image is blurred. I don't see how this is a cultural event. |
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05/12/2007 03:25:47 PM |
| poor focus- not relevant to topic |
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05/11/2007 03:05:27 PM |
| Uhm, I don't like the lighting, too bright on the left and too dark on the right. Furthermore, there's a lot of motion blur, which seems out of place in this particular picture. Somewhere in my mind four letters arise, but others might told you which already.. -1- |
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05/11/2007 03:20:11 AM |
| lighting is bad, subject is blurry, don't understand the meaning of the photo- 2 |
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05/10/2007 10:42:05 PM |
| Not sure how this meets the challenge. Image is out of focus, and lighting is harsh. |
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05/10/2007 05:41:49 PM |
| Out of focus, and from my point of view DNMC |
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05/10/2007 10:59:20 AM |
| hmm this picture seems to be a little bit askew to eh left and out of focus nice idea tho |
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05/09/2007 11:44:03 PM |
If you were going for a blurry shot of an eye... you captured it! Myself, if you were going to take a picture of an eye I would at least have had it in focus.
Sorry... (2 |
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05/09/2007 08:03:46 PM |
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05/09/2007 03:56:15 PM |
| out of focus; poor exposure; unclear as to what the cultural event is... |
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05/09/2007 02:41:11 PM |
| hmmmmm out of focus? trance=focus |
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05/09/2007 01:55:06 PM |
| Don't quite understand how this fits into the challenge. |
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05/09/2007 11:46:20 AM |
| I dont understand how this image reflects culture. And the overall image is blurry and has very harsh lighting. |
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05/09/2007 11:34:42 AM |
| Over all this picture isn't very good. I don't understand what it has to do with the challenge, its blurrry, the lighting is too harsh, and shot is taken way to close-up. Sorry. Maybe next time. |
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05/09/2007 10:14:22 AM |
| having trouble fitting this into the challenge ... |
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05/09/2007 02:19:34 AM |
| A little too "camera-phone" for my liking. |
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05/09/2007 01:36:06 AM |
-blurry
-color balance off
-doesn't really have much to do with the challenge without the title.
Don't be discouraged, though -- keep trying! |
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05/09/2007 01:04:12 AM |
| what kind of cultural trance is this? show us |
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