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09/01/2008 12:47:46 PM |
| How cool! You reversed the blur making the subjects blurry and the background sharp! Well done! |
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05/16/2007 03:32:57 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Great motion capture.
Compositionally, I can't decide if I like having the tops of their heads and backs cropped out or not. On the plus side, it fills the frame better, and contributes to the sense of urgency or speed that the shot conveys. On the negative shot, it feels a bit accidental, because not much was cropped out.
Technically, I like that you have chosen to show the bicycles blurry. That helps to capture the motion and speed. I do think the back wall could be a bit more in focus, though. If it had been, this would have been an incredible shot.
Overall, good work in this challenge. You met the challenge well and had a good photograph.
If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
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05/14/2007 05:52:46 PM |
| One of the most original I've seen in this challenge. The colours and blur just work real well to depict movement and sport in action. Good luck! |
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05/14/2007 02:47:24 AM |
| Nice use of shutter speed, very different. A nice touch of blurring the cyclist. What puts it all in perspective is the writing on the window. |
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05/13/2007 12:31:48 PM |
| Good idea for a shot. Picking a better background could have made this much better (the current one is distracting and unattractive). |
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05/12/2007 08:58:25 PM |
| Nice concept which works in some cases but I think there's too much to look at (esp. words) in the background, which hurts the effect here. Also you might want to include a little more on top so you're not skimming off the tops of their backs & heads. |
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05/12/2007 10:55:36 AM |
| this is very cool, great capture. |
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05/10/2007 04:01:23 PM |
| I like having the cyclists blurred, the background still. Works well. |
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05/10/2007 06:24:33 AM |
| Nice colours there. Has the feeling of time-lapse too. |
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05/10/2007 01:25:37 AM |
| good idea, wish there was something in the background of more prominance |
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05/09/2007 12:45:35 PM |
| I like the idea of focusing on the background (i.e. keep the camera still). For a nice "contrast in stress" it would have been really cool to find a background that was solidly relaxed, eternal etc. Like some green fields with a really old church or an old oak, or an old cafe with grandpa's playing chess. |
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05/09/2007 12:39:23 AM |
| should have used a faster shutter speed, i think. too blurry |
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