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Bowling Elements
Bowling Elements
kfeher


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Sports III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF 28-105mm f/3.5-4.5 II USM
Location: East Meadow Bowl in East Meadow, NY
Date: May 6, 2007
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/10
Galleries: Sports, Candid
Date Uploaded: May 7, 2007

My son was preparing to bowl at the East Meadow Bowl in East Meadow, NY

Statistics
Place: 139 out of 230
Avg (all users): 5.3836
Avg (commenters): 4.6250
Avg (participants): 5.0833
Avg (non-participants): 5.5704
Views since voting: 616
Views during voting: 310
Votes: 219
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
05/17/2007 04:25:28 AM
Hey there from the Critique Club

First off, congrats on a new top score. It's always nice to have a new image sitting there at the front.

Camera Work/Technical: I am pretty sure that the hand and ball are in focus here, but it is really difficult to find the main area of focus. I think this may be because of your lighting.

Lighting: Your subject is a bit too dark. I'd like to see some fill flash added in there to really make that ball and hand pop.

Composition/Content: Well-done. I like the action that you captured here using your composition.

My Opinion: Adding a little more light on your subject would have really helped bring this one to life. As it is, finding your focus is a bit tough.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

edit because I clicked the submit button too fast.

Message edited by author 2007-05-17 04:41:31.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/14/2007 05:04:36 PM
Great idea, but need more focus and sharpness on the hand and ball
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/14/2007 01:45:36 AM
Excellent DOF, it makes me feel that I am right there ready to throw the ball. The ball is slightly out of focus.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/11/2007 10:31:05 AM
Like this.
05/10/2007 11:09:33 AM
Nice perspective and approach
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/10/2007 02:21:24 AM
A sharper focus on the ball would be nice. It all just seems a little fuzzy.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/09/2007 10:50:06 AM
Nice shot. The background seems to be exposed nicely but the main subject are a bit underexposed IMHO
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/09/2007 09:26:05 AM
Despite being a nice photograph, this entry does not fall within the parameters of this weeks challenge (action). That being said, I must judge this photograph accordingly. :-(
05/09/2007 07:36:02 AM
Was it a strike?


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