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05/17/2007 04:25:06 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Strong focus and great colors. I like the quick shutter speed that you used to capture the stopped motion of the milk. I think that your depth of field needed to change. Either a more shallow or deeper depth of field would have helped this one out. As it is, it just looks like some of your elements are out of focus.
Lighting: You did a nice job achieving an evenly lit area to display your subject(s). There are no blown highlights, nor are there any areas where detail was lost in the shadows.
Composition/Content: I think that you hurt this one by cropping off the hand that is pouring the liquid. It looks more accidental than intentional.
My Opinion: While this one meets the challenge, I don't think that is was readily understandable without your explanation.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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05/14/2007 11:45:14 AM |
| Nice. Could use a little less busy things in it. |
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05/09/2007 04:19:14 PM |
| a lower angle (e.g. ground level view) may have made this shot more interesting |
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05/09/2007 02:16:44 PM |
| Ganesh the elephant god? Mid drip....great timing, nice color and texture contrasts, well composed piece |
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05/09/2007 01:13:08 PM |
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05/09/2007 10:06:23 AM |
| the framing hurts this one ... |
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05/09/2007 03:21:49 AM |
| good pic...although a close up would have been great - especially with the milk drops... |
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05/09/2007 02:20:41 AM |
| Not bad, but I wish the statuette were positioned differently in the frame. Also, I want to see more of the hand that's pouring the milk. |
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