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05/12/2007 01:39:00 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club -
Welcome to the wonderful world that is DPC. Not a bad score for your first entry. My first four entries were well below 5.
Your image here has cool color. The clouds and light play also hold some interest. But i think what your image is lacking is a focal point of interest. The sky is cool and all but its not enough to carry the image - which it has to. I feel you have a bit too much black space on both top and bottom. Primarily the top though. It just isnt balanced well. I think this would be better as a thinner panaoramic image.
Not much else I can offer you here as critique. But I do hope you enjoy your time here at DPC. It can become quite addictive but there is also such a wealth of info to be taken from this place and its photographers. Have fun and keep on shooting!
Tim |
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05/07/2007 12:15:45 PM |
| Cool! this would be awesome with even more contrast! Good job though - I like your composition. |
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05/01/2007 09:57:39 PM |
| how about a tighter crop on top to match the bottom side? |
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05/01/2007 05:17:46 PM |
| A little too much dark on top? |
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05/01/2007 09:11:04 AM |
| A think a tighter crop would work better (mostly up top). |
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