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05/07/2007 02:07:42 AM |
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The first thing when I saw it was that I noticed that it wasn't using all of the available image space. Personally I think showing off the subject in larger detail, and having less background/frame, would have been nice. However, you did a *fantastic* job of having it be symmetric and balanced. The arrangement of the three images wouldn't have been my choice BUT you did it very very nicely. I also think voters probably appreciated seeing a non-traditional arrangement of images.
A blue sky would have helped this immensely. Something like that could be accomplished in Advanced editing and I think would have just set the mood a little bit better. Your colors and your contrast are very nice. I also like the white outer border as it matches the images nicely.
I think your presentation of the building was very competent but it did not impress me. Perhaps having a closeup or two for the additional side images would have drawn me in a bit more and caused me to have more interest in the subject. I will say that this is your weakest point - the lack of "wow factor". And I think your strongest point was a nice, crisp presentation of the images. |
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05/01/2007 01:06:37 AM |
| Great set - Nice crisp lighting but maybe not the best choice of setting out. |
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04/30/2007 08:44:35 PM |
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04/30/2007 12:20:56 PM |
| nice individual shots, but something about all the empty space doesn't seem quite right. |
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04/30/2007 03:14:12 AM |
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04/30/2007 12:53:05 AM |
| Cool I like the different take on this |
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