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05/13/2007 10:58:37 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Welcome to DPC! I see that this is your first entry in a challenge...that's the hardest part, entering for the first time.
The image fits the challenge and the title adds a bit of humor and dimension. I like the way you played with light-writing to create the subject...it really feels like Pi has been branded on the wood wall.
Unfortunately the focus feels soft and since your aperature was small enough to create a large depth of field I can only guess that either the camera support shook during the exposure or something else mysterious happened to create the blur.
A square crop might have helped to emphasize the circle in your composition since the black areas at top and bottom don't add to the story.
Overall, a fine first photo to enter! Don't let the scores discourage you...DPC voters are harsh critics and a "6" is considered fairly awesome here.
Keep shooting!
--Kadi |
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05/04/2007 10:28:00 PM |
| this would have been awesome if it where just a little sharper...still good though |
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05/04/2007 12:13:22 AM |
| Apparently a time lapse photo with a penlight but it looks much like glowing electrical elements. Good job. |
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05/03/2007 11:02:17 PM |
| good effort. focus seem off a bit |
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05/03/2007 06:48:53 PM |
| I have seen this process alot on this site, really like what you have done with it |
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05/03/2007 11:26:37 AM |
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05/03/2007 11:17:03 AM |
| i like the idea,the colors are really cool! |
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05/02/2007 04:38:00 PM |
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