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Challenge: Rule of Thirds III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D50
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 80-200mm f/2.8D ED
Location: Aerial Extreme, Willen Lake, Milton Keynes
Date: Apr 21, 2007
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/800
Galleries: Sports, Action
Date Uploaded: Apr 23, 2007

Taken at Aerial Extreme, Willen Lake, Milton Keynes.

Place: 265 out of 380
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05/05/2007 09:51:34 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Hi Lian. While this image is definitely divided in thirds and quite well I might add, it doesn't really follow the "Rule of Thirds" which is quite well defined in the arts world. Your subject, while captured well, is centered in the composition which is causing a stagnant feel. I think if you had moved your subject to the left of the frame, leaving us plenty of room in front of him to see where he is going you could have made a stronger, more dynamic composition. I hope this helps.

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/30/2007 08:47:29 AM
I do like the facial expression, he seems very concentrated.
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04/29/2007 04:56:49 PM
Nicely composed. I like the look of concentration on your subject's face.
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04/27/2007 03:09:26 PM
Nice. Focus is right on his eyes.
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04/27/2007 01:08:49 AM
Interesting take on the ROT. A little unconventional but still works IMO. I'm sure many may disagree ;(
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04/26/2007 06:56:06 PM
Yes u can and u did it well..
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04/25/2007 09:33:23 PM
What determination!
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04/25/2007 08:55:46 PM
A slight fill in flash might have made this even better.
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