Greetings from the critique club. FIrst off let me say this is a nice idea from the challenge stand point. I like the many bubbles and the negative space. My biggest concern with this shot is the lack of focus. I can see the bubble to the left almost in focus, just a touch off, but the shallow DOF and the lack of overall focus takes away from the shot. User a larger number Fstop will get deeper DOF and more in focus. Good luck in future challenges.
MattO
Thank you MattO for you input. Many viewers expressed the same opinions and consequently can strive for an image with greater clarity, sharpness.
Really have so much to learn here.. Am still excited especially since u where kind enuf to point out something good it helps..
Greetings from the critique club. FIrst off let me say this is a nice idea from the challenge stand point. I like the many bubbles and the negative space. My biggest concern with this shot is the lack of focus. I can see the bubble to the left almost in focus, just a touch off, but the shallow DOF and the lack of overall focus takes away from the shot. User a larger number Fstop will get deeper DOF and more in focus. Good luck in future challenges.
I like it, but unfortunately it's out of focus and the contrast is poor (the background would look better completely black). The bubble-part in the lower left corner also bugges me.
I love the colors of the bubbles & their clairty. I like how they fill the whole page without "overdoing" it. I think this is nicely composed also, maybe one or two more, placed in the upper right corner would have filled it out nicely!
Like the colors, but image is too oof. One trick I learned is to use manual focus, then focus on one area, blow bubbles and when they get to the focus point, I snap the pic. Continuous focus and shutter release also works relatively well.
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