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04/30/2007 12:16:10 AM |
Hi from the Critique Club.
Fit: The shot contains kitchenware so it is a fit for the challenge. I wonder if some voters saw the food as DNMC elements?
Composition: The composition seems ok. We have string lines all leading to the one point. The decorations on the plate do seem to detract from these lines a bit.
Technical: As the commenters have noted, the oversaturation is a bit hard on the eyes! It is a good look in some ways but once we look at the image we find that the oversaturation is not really a key element in the image. The knife and fork seem to be the major elements so the colours seem to be a negative element.
Feel: I like the strong colours and grany feel the image has but the shot as a whole seems to be lacking a string message for me...what is the shot trying to say to me? Not even the title really helps me feel your intent.
PM me if you have any queries |
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04/29/2007 06:59:34 AM |
| well done but to me, to busy... |
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04/25/2007 04:46:14 PM |
| Colors, composition and treatment of subject matter quite fun. Somehow the lack of shadow under the plate tricks the eye and really flattens things. Nice |
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04/24/2007 10:50:18 PM |
| The white is a bit bright on my eyes - but the design is interesting. 8. |
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04/24/2007 01:19:22 PM |
| Good composition and detail. Nice colour. Great contrast. |
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04/24/2007 12:38:30 PM |
| nice composition, may be a little bit too bright (for my taste, skin of the lemon is too burned out) |
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04/23/2007 11:17:21 AM |
| The plate is distracting IMHO. The blue edge would be really nice without the sunflowers, they compete with the lemon. |
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04/23/2007 03:23:39 AM |
| lighting is too flat. looks oversaturated. |
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