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Lines and Light
Coley


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Free Study 2007-04 (Expert Editing*)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
Location: Just outside of Bradford Ontario along HWY 400
Date: Apr 21, 2007
Aperture: f 7.1
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160 sec
Galleries: Rural, Textures
Date Uploaded: Apr 21, 2007

I did a retake of this shed (originally called desolation)
I was really interested by the way the rising sun changed the scene. I thought it was very cool. This is a simple image but it is rich with composition. The colours, the curves, the contrast, the lines, the rule of thirds... Hey it's my free study :)

Hope this does well, I really like the shot

Coley

Statistics
Place: 104 out of 573
Avg (all users): 6.2444
Avg (commenters): 7.6000
Avg (participants): 6.1061
Avg (non-participants): 6.6250
Views since voting: 1376
Views during voting: 246
Votes: 180
Comments: 10
Favorites: 2 (view)


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AuthorThread
07/27/2012 12:57:19 PM
where is this??? i need to go visit it.
07/19/2007 12:28:52 AM
This was way underated IMO, the simplicity is so absorbing. For me, the highlights|shadows make the shot, I think clouds would add something this image just doesn't need. Be proud......
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05/09/2007 04:39:33 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Cole,

Congrates on a superb take. I'm personally find the score low, but there you go. What absolutely makes this image for me is the golden light and shadows raking across the fields - beautiful. The shed gived a nice focal point, but isn't really what the shot is about.

So I ask myself what is there not to like? Not a lot really. Perhaps you've hedged your bets a bit with the sky - either more or less. I think a centimeter crop off the bottom and left would have helped, but thats just my opinion. I disagree with the comment below about this needing clouds; I think that would have detracted from the overall starkness.

It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.

Cheers
Paul
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/07/2007 09:12:08 PM
Very beautiful!
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05/04/2007 07:28:02 PM
So clean and simple. I like the negative space and the color gradients. Lovely golden tones. Back to bump you up to 9.
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05/03/2007 12:26:58 AM
Clouds might have made this perfect, but I still love it, great work.
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05/02/2007 11:11:31 PM
very nice - a soft & simple composition - good luck!
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05/02/2007 05:15:53 PM
A true gem of a charmer.
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05/01/2007 11:49:09 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous. The simplicity and serenity of the composition and colors is amazing. Great job.
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05/01/2007 03:34:05 PM
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