CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
He looks like he is ready to do battle!
Compositionally, the little critter is in an excellent point in the frame. There is a good use of negative space that helps to emphasize the subject, and it is a stable, balanced feeling shot. I also like the low perspective you have chosen to use. I really like that you captured the "eye contact."
Technically, *I* like the shallow depth of field and how the grass in the foreground is blurry. Upon first glance, though, it gives the impression of the whole picture being out of focus, and in a field of almost 600 entries, a shot has to have immediate appeal, which it may not have done for several.
Also, the green is a bit drab which gives the picture more of a "ho-hum" feeling rather than making it *pop.* Obviously, that is difficult to control, but maybe playing with brightness/contrast or saturation *might* give it a bit of color.
overall, I think it is a good shot, and it made me smile. Be careful, though, they can bite!
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