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Challenge: Rule of Thirds III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-V1
Location: Staten Island, New York
Date: Apr 19, 2007
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 7 seconds
Galleries: Cityscape, Urban
Date Uploaded: Apr 19, 2007

This spot on my Island is one of my favorites. Just to my right is an old restored Mansion which housed Alice Austen, the photographer who I look up to the most.

Basic editing. Sharpening, a crop and a border. Tripod mounted, 7 second exposure.

Statistics
Place: 161 out of 380
Avg (all users): 5.6730
Avg (commenters): 6.6000
Avg (participants): 5.5250
Avg (non-participants): 5.8228
Views since voting: 853
Views during voting: 222
Votes: 159
Comments: 9
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12/03/2007 08:52:56 PM
I really like the light above the city. Maybe if you had stood to the left of the sign, the arrow could have pointed to it. Who knows, but I like the shot. I think having that little piece of the sky lit really helps move the eye around the image.
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05/05/2007 05:05:47 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club

Initial reaction: My kinda shot. To the left, but where is that? What's there? The posts remind me of chess pieces, or some weird alien soldiers. The city in the distance seems totally oblivious to what's taking place on this side of the water. It's a very cool story.

Technicals: Good stuff here. The lights above the arrow will be considered blown by some. I like the glow. Were this advanced editing, I'd suggest toning down the wood railing a bit (burning or selective levels, etc) to emphasize the sign and lights even more. Sky is very good, especially right over the city.

Meets challenge - yep, looks like it does to me.

A very intriguing shot.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/28/2007 08:37:41 PM
A wonderful photo, except the bright red lights. Unfortunately that is what makes it Rule of Thirds. You met the challenge nicely. 7
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04/26/2007 10:20:03 PM
I really love the background on this, especially the sky.
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04/26/2007 04:32:32 PM
Good night take and use of 1/3 rule...7
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04/26/2007 02:39:04 PM
imo, better if pointing into the shot. 6
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04/26/2007 11:05:53 AM
The sky takes up half the shot, and the sign is too high. Nice exposure but doesn;t meet the challenge very well.
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04/25/2007 03:37:30 AM
subject is mundane and interesting all at once. i like it :)
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04/25/2007 12:20:28 AM
Wow. Everything is wow. You done did good
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