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05/05/2007 11:15:42 AM |
| Greetings from the Critique club. I'm going to point out a few things that I like about the photo first. I like the focus the clarity and the B&W conversion. DId it meet the challenge? I'm not so sure, the focal point of the photo to the average viewer gives us the impression that the cross is the focal point. However when you add the title it becomes more obvious where the focal point would be, then your closer to meeting the challenge. Unfortunaltly for you most viewers rarely read the title when voting, they like the photo to tell the story. Another note that religous themed shots generally do not score well, unless they are very powerful. I know its not always about the score but just keep that in the back of your mind for future entries. I'd have suggested maybe moving the cross closer to the intended focal point. I also might suggest adding a bit of constrast to the shot to make it pop a bit more. Good luck in future challenges. |
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05/02/2007 05:08:55 AM |
| the focal point is not suppose to be the cross, but the verse, I guess i didnt do a good enough job showing that... |
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04/29/2007 11:37:08 AM |
| The cross is almost dead center in this shot. DNMC. |
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04/28/2007 08:26:21 AM |
| the main topic of the photo appears to be played dead center - got to say that any compliance with rule of thirds is a little too subtle for me to see 3 |
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04/25/2007 01:41:54 AM |
| more centered than rule of thirds. Good inspirational theme |
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04/25/2007 01:08:16 AM |
| I like the concept...I wish the cross were more out of the center... |
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