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12/10/2003 05:52:26 AM |
I would like to thank all that voted and just add I have taken all comments on board.I will endeavour not to rush my next entry and hope to improve the quality of my next entry.From the comments received this could have had much higher scores if the shot had been more carefully thought out.
Thanks,
Paul. |
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12/09/2003 06:50:16 PM |
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12/09/2003 12:10:43 PM |
| I can relate! great image! |
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12/07/2003 04:29:29 PM |
| This might work but the background is distracting. Perhaps move him completely in front of the wall or something? Good choice for the challenge though. |
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12/06/2003 11:27:21 AM |
| Great idea, fitting the challenge much better then many other submissions, if not even best: the link too money is perfect. However, the image is a little too "snap-shooty" IMO. The background disturbs and due to the flash the light is too harsh. |
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12/06/2003 10:18:09 AM |
| Good idea. Execution could be improved : for example by paying more attention to the background, light area on the left, dark area on the right, with painting or door ? Should be equal and not drawing attention away. |
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12/05/2003 07:53:12 PM |
| A good idea for the challenge. Perhaps one pocket would do as well as two? Or better for not splitting our attention. The balance of having both packets is ruined by the distracting and imbalanced background. The lighting is casting some harsh shadows that take away too. |
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12/05/2003 02:08:11 PM |
| The lighting is kind of harsh. If you have no other light source than on camera flash, try practicing with available light. If your camera allows it, try to balance flash with existing light. |
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12/05/2003 12:54:58 PM |
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12/04/2003 07:41:56 PM |
Technical: Fits the challenge. Exposure/lighting- you used a flash, didn't you? Yuck.... Composition looks too cropped- this could have been done without making it that narrow. Focus is good.
Personal: Good idea, definitely could have been more creatively executed.
My vote: 2 |
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12/04/2003 07:31:14 PM |
| Really good idea for the challenge. I think your composition needed a bit more thought. The shot is well focused and the colors are good. The light is a little bit harsh, but not too bad. Good idea. |
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12/04/2003 05:59:55 PM |
| Good color, I like the title. |
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12/04/2003 03:50:55 PM |
| You should have him stand in front of the wall without the door or something in the back right side. Also, you need to think about getting rid of the shadows of the man's hand and pocket with another light source. |
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12/04/2003 01:05:47 PM |
| Good idea, but the background and the shadows from the on-camera flash leave a lot to be desired. |
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12/04/2003 07:09:50 AM |
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12/03/2003 08:03:31 PM |
| The background is really distracting. You should have placed your model in front of a plain wall. |
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12/03/2003 07:09:13 PM |
the buckle on the belt competes too much for the viewer's attention
the rings and the watch contradict the message |
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12/03/2003 12:05:16 PM |
| It's a good concept for the challenge - great idea. I think it could be improved if you had the model standing in front of a blank white or black background or something similar - the few elements on the right side of the frame are a little distracting. |
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12/03/2003 10:19:36 AM |
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12/03/2003 05:22:46 AM |
| This could be a good idea, but you have to think about the background when you take a picture and the flash is giving some ugly shadows, anyway good idea ;) |
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