Greetings from the Critique Club.
Welcome to DPC! Can't believe this is your first challenge entry... I wish mine was this good!
I think the image is very good. Interesting geometry that draws the viewer in, lovely interplay of light and shadow which works really well in B&W. Nice and sharp and detailed too, even in low res.
Under advanced editing, I would've cloned out the little light in the top left corner, and maybe burned the window in the lower left corner a bit, but as this was under basic editing rules, I think you've done all you could.
I'm actually surprised this didn't score a bit higher, but I would imagine that to an extent you got marked down for the image not being obviously 'still'. Yes, I agree it's as still as it gets, buildings don't move much on the whole, but some DPC voters can be a bit obtuse when it comes to seeing challenge theme connections...
Anyway, fantastic image, and please do keep submitting them!
Message me if you have any questions.
Jelena |
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