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03/23/2007 07:20:19 PMPost actions
I think it would be more effective as a portrait if it was cropped to bring the girl in much closer, removing most of the railing and much of the distracting background above her head. I would keep only a few of the flowers on the right. The girl is lovely and has a very nice expression with nice light on her face.
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03/22/2007 09:35:46 PMPost actions
Not sure what the focusof the photo is meant to be. The flowers seem more important than the girl.
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03/21/2007 03:14:47 PMPost actions
IMHO the large flower pot takes the attention from the woman
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03/20/2007 06:52:38 PMPost actions
a more dynamic and candid version of the cliche. 7
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03/20/2007 05:15:30 AMPost actions
more flower less person, blurred flowers too.4
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03/19/2007 02:32:54 PMPost actions
This would be really nice I think if you cropped off 2/3rds of the flowers on the right side so that the viewers eyes are drawn to the girl's face.
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03/19/2007 01:20:35 PMPost actions
IMHO the flowers are over powering the image, I'd prefer a tighter crop.
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03/19/2007 12:26:09 PMPost actions
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03/19/2007 01:20:58 AMPost actions
cute shot, the people in the background are a distraction
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03/19/2007 12:36:52 AMPost actions
dang, loses a point for the people in the background. 7
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