Sorry, doesn't do it for me. I notice the focus on his eyes, but that couch is taking away from the picture. Good try tho. I like the narrow depth of field. All I can say is get rid of the couch.
i like the capture on his face, good lighting and crisp. Unfortunately the bright area on his shirt distracts, as does the object to the side of his head (a carpet?).
I think this has potential. The background is a bit distracting. And the colors could be more vibrant. The composition is great. Face could be a hair more sharp. Overall it has nice appeal.
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