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amcraig


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Challenge: Scents and Aromas (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Houston, TX
Date: Nov 23, 2003
Date Uploaded: Nov 23, 2003

My 1st Entry

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12/05/2003 12:26:32 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club
and welcome to the site.

This is a good first effort for a challenge. It definitely fit the criteria of the challenge.

A number of comments have already pointed out some the weaknesses.

The crop and angle are the two major points I see.

If you could bring the level of view up, to focus more on the cookies and the top part of the oven I think it will help. A little light on the interior of the oven would accent it. I could see using a smaller baking sheet with fewer cookies so you would have more space around your central theme.

I do think that the oven mitt is fine, it creates a sense of movement, your pulling the fresh cookies out of the oven. I might find a more neutral one though.

I hope this helps.

JC
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/02/2003 10:55:48 PM
The cookies look great, but I think the shot cries out for cropping fairly close below the tray, and the hot pad looks out of place.
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12/02/2003 05:06:42 PM
What yummy cookies! I feel like the lighting could be changed to create more of a warm tone, though- this lighting makes it seem a little bit sterile.
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12/02/2003 03:22:03 PM
Perfect, a great definition for "scents and aromas"! Good work, really!
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12/01/2003 08:45:13 PM
Strange how Your title contradicted the image u are trying to portray, I thought I felt that the cookies are COLD rather then freshly out of the oven... Lighting inadequacy??? i think it could be. Warmer coloured lighting will help.
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11/29/2003 02:29:17 PM
mmm those look goooooooooooood (=
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11/28/2003 09:08:52 PM
I like your photo but I would have liked the angle of view a little higher.
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11/28/2003 06:46:54 PM
Did you buy a baking tray just for this shot? And were those cookies really baked on it? It's still very clean ... kind of points up the dirty look of the oven behind them I fear.
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11/27/2003 09:44:29 AM
What a wonderful idea. I can smell them from here :) Well done!
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11/27/2003 01:56:57 AM
Just a record shot. I appreciate the cookies smell good but it's just not coming across for me.
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11/26/2003 08:29:23 PM
Yummy, but needs a little more artistic quality to this one
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