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walk away
walk away
elmomarie


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Location: lake superior.
Date: Feb 24, 2007
Galleries: Emotive, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Mar 7, 2007

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i edited this quite a bit.

i'm leaving now.
this is my goodbye.
no more tears.
no more pain.
this is the end of your tyrannicall rein.
expended every last bit of my patience.
thinking you'd wake up to your mistakes.
and see the blood left in your wake.
oblivious to the hurt you cause.
isn't this breaking some kind of parental laws?
leave me alone.
i don't care anymore.
just let me bleed 'til i'm gone.
body rising with the bloody dawn.
don't try to stop me.
this time i promise it won't work.
let me live.
without your bonds.
but i now see.
freedom is not in your vocabulary.
you say you love me.
and want the best.
that these rules are what i need.
but if all of this is true.
then i have to ask of you:
why am i.
walking away from your hazardous embrace?

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05/20/2007 11:12:50 PM
Originally posted by shalrath:

This is really cool! The bottom right feels a little empty, perhaps a different crop? Still, love the message :). The prose is great as well, yours?


thank you so much. i kinda wanted the picture to feel empty that's why i left the space... thank you though. and yes it's mine.
05/17/2007 03:01:34 AM
This is really cool! The bottom right feels a little empty, perhaps a different crop? Still, love the message :). The prose is great as well, yours?
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