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03/18/2007 06:34:53 AM |
Hi, Greetings from the Critique Club:
Composition:You obviously live in an area that is prevalent for snow. What you need to do is take into account that there are members that don't experience it. So you have to show a little bit more in your image. With that I mean, the chair...doesn't really stand out as a chair. It is lost in the background, which is of the same material. The viewer doesn't really understand the story...there is no surrounds to explain the situation. Maybe include another item to relate to the snow season or show a bit more of the surroundings.
Technical: Your settings, focus and lighting were correct for this image. But as I said before, the composition let you down. Maybe try and being a little more creative....maybe in your PP add a little punch to the wood textures to separate them a bit more.
Overall: This image has lots of room for improvement...and that is good. As once you get perfection you may as well give up....as there is no longer a challenge. |
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03/10/2007 07:24:42 PM |
| background really competes and the perspective is odd, but I agree - its been cold outside lately!!! |
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03/05/2007 04:28:43 PM |
| Nice capture - nice and crisp. |
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03/05/2007 09:46:35 AM |
| all of the lines compete with each other and don't seem to flow well ... |
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