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03/05/2007 04:54:23 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club. The following comments are in response to your request for a critique on your challenge submission. Please feel free to send me a PM concerning my comments.
This image is intriguing. I like the repetition of pattern in the blood and twisting of the thread. Compositionally this is a strong image. I like, too, the selective focus on the head of the needle but think it would be nice to see the sharpness of the needle's point.
Somehow, it seems that that's a lot of blood for a little needle to cause. And I'm not sure about the connection to the challenge subject of hate. It is, perhaps, this ambiguity that kept the image from scoring higher in the challenge...what is the hate? Do you hate sewing? Did you hate yourself and prick yourself repeatedly with this tiny weapon? I'm not sure.
Overall, I like the creativity in this image. It's interesting to look at and slows me down in viewing it to try and figure it out. I'm sorry if my "critique" is short but I'm at a loss to say what should or could be different.
Keep working at it, you've got an interesting vision!
--Kadi |
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02/27/2007 12:17:56 AM |
| Good close up of the needle's eye. Is this a sharp needle, hard to tell. |
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02/23/2007 02:12:43 PM |
| this is a really disturbing and intriquing image. still not sure where the "hate" is in this image, but willing to give you the benefit of the doubt because it certainly does convey malice. - 8 |
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02/22/2007 08:28:42 PM |
| What, you couldn't sew things up? |
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02/22/2007 11:37:06 AM |
| Great shot!. Like the shallow dept of field. |
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02/22/2007 12:47:50 AM |
| wish the focus was different, because im like trying to focus on the blood but the sttring is in focus instead/ |
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02/21/2007 08:16:45 PM |
| lighting is great on this...gl 8 |
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02/21/2007 01:44:39 PM |
| hummmm i dont know about this one, i feel like somethings missing... |
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02/21/2007 12:23:09 PM |
| I like the red on white...very interesting! the lighting is also very good. |
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02/21/2007 11:37:51 AM |
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