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11/24/2003 08:26:50 PM |
Greatings from the Critique Club
This is very hard to critique.
Conceptually, it's good. Being american money it doesn't have a lot of colour to work with. Shame you couldn't get ahold of some Euro's!
As far as composition, it just isn't, well, exciting. The lighting is a bit flat. I'm rather at a loss as to what to say to improve it.
I don't know how you would introduce more contrast, which might help, you picked up about as much detail as is possible.
It is an interesting perspective.
I'm sorry I don't have more constructive things to say.
JC |
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11/18/2003 09:54:15 PM |
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11/18/2003 05:12:34 PM |
| I lie the composition & the use of different bills |
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11/18/2003 03:50:16 PM |
| Nice work... great interpretation. |
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11/16/2003 09:02:54 PM |
| I like the irony in this. Neat shot too. |
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11/13/2003 09:36:01 PM |
| by stacking and spreading out the bills randomly and using a narrow DOF you have given 2D objects some thre dimesionality. |
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11/13/2003 06:51:50 PM |
| awesome idea-good job -- 8 |
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11/13/2003 06:36:45 PM |
| Can I have some? The picture looks undersharpened in some spots and just right on others, to bad you couldnt get it just right everywhere. |
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11/13/2003 07:55:46 AM |
| I know how hard it is to focus with a short DOF, but I'd like to see Jackson a tad more in focus... still a nice shot and a great idea for a book title. |
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11/12/2003 06:58:45 PM |
| should have considered building a scene around this money. Seems to lack life. Nice subtle colors though |
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11/12/2003 06:36:44 PM |
| Good composition. Loan me $20? |
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11/12/2003 10:53:53 AM |
a wider DOF would be more effective in this i think
soup |
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11/12/2003 03:36:11 AM |
Nice concept and timly commentary.
Don't know if it's a book only know the movie. dosn't matter to me |
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