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02/28/2007 01:33:16 PM |
| this is alright, but doesn't really grab my attention. you need something compositionally that's going to smack me and make me want to hang around. |
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02/08/2007 06:42:03 PM |
Technicals: Not bad focus. 70-300 lenses are typically pretty soft. The lighting is poor and borders on harsh, which probably limited the amount of contrast you could add in processing.
The feel: When I do a shot like this, I like to control everything. You have all the time in the world. Look at the canvas. I would have removed the detrius in the middle (with tweezers if needed). I may have also raised the lens to put the flowers a little lower on the canvas. (that depends on what was then introduced into the scene). Balance between two pictures is nice, but here, I think it is actually too balanced. Working with other angles or crops would have been interesting.
The game: I think the lighting hurt you the most on this picture. |
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02/05/2007 11:01:03 AM |
| great macro - maybe a bit too much noise |
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02/02/2007 11:59:55 AM |
| underexposed, grainy, poor focus... nice borders though |
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02/01/2007 02:31:10 PM |
| Maybe should have removed the dead plant bits first they kind of distract. |
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