The technicals: I like the composition of the two geese. The balance each other well while maintaining interest with asymmetry. The lighting is flat which doesn't lead to a very dynamic feel.
The feel: the DOF is a good idea, but not necessarily with the clutter of the background. This picture would have been much stronger without the black railing or the boats(?).
The score: I think you did fairly well for the shot. The limiting factor is the flat light and the background. You did the best you could for the situation, but there may not have been a 6+ picture available to take. |