The technicals: excellent. Lighting is nicely smooth. Background is black. Conversion to B&W is wonderful. Composition is good except I would have moved the nerf gun down may two inches. You get both her eyes (which is good), but the half-cut glasses, to me, is a poorer choice than making them all visible.
The feel: subtle. captures a bit of who she is. Like I said above, a bit gutsy to hide some of the face for a portrait, but you almost got away with it. Showing just a bit more would have been better.
The game: too subtle for DPC. Don't worry about that. You can tell it's a quality shot from only having 8 votes of 1-3 and far more 6s than 4s. It just doesn't have the "wow" to carry the day at DPC.