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01/30/2007 06:01:19 PM |
Hi June, I saw in the forums that you were looking for some critique. I thought overall it was a good shot, but the post processing was a bit harsh. I think it would have done better if it were a bit less contrasty and sharp. Compositionally, my eye keeps getting stuck on the guy's back. I keep missing the big picture, and getting sucked back into "why did she take a picture of a penguin's back?"
I think the biggest problem, and why it didn't score higher is the cute factor. Many of the images that scored better were cute, pretty, or elegant. Your guy has a big scar on his back, and some pretty harsh post processing, which I think makes it look more realistic and natural, but a viewer who's being fed a lot of eye candy will mark a "realistic" shot lower. That doesn't make it a bad photo, just one that doesn't score as well on DPC. |
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01/30/2007 04:20:52 PM |
In response to //www.dpchallenge.com/forum.php?action=read&FORUM_THREAD_ID=536503
I think that a couple of people noted that your entry appeared a little oversharpened which I agree with. I guess thats the way it goes. Go out into freezing conditions and end up doing the damage to your image back in the comfort of your own home. (I've had faaaar too many of those experiences myself).
I myself actually gave it a 6. I probably would have voted a bit higher had it been a little softer. The moment you captured was great. It just lost that soft touch with the extra sharpening. |
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01/30/2007 04:18:08 PM |
| Firstly, an excellent find and certainly genuine based upon your location. The editing appears a bit harsh primarily ranging from oversharpened to somewhat blurry. The reddish area around the eyes appears slightly plasticized due to noise reduction thus eliminating virtually all detail in the head area. The concept is really good but the angle from which the photo was taken does not convey your intent as well as it could have. I'd have tons of fun chasing these little critters around given the opportunity as they'd make for some outstanding and tolerant subjects. Hope that provides some insight. |
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01/28/2007 07:55:11 PM |
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01/27/2007 07:01:54 PM |
| Incredible capture - great shot! Certainly one of my top picks this challenge!! |
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01/27/2007 03:22:35 PM |
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01/26/2007 07:12:24 PM |
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01/26/2007 05:24:38 PM |
| great title...the processing isn't great, but I like the quirkiness |
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01/25/2007 08:58:50 PM |
| birds backs never do it for me. |
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01/25/2007 07:41:27 AM |
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01/23/2007 05:38:55 PM |
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01/22/2007 12:37:07 PM |
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01/22/2007 09:05:55 AM |
| Awwwww. how sweet! Very cute shot. |
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01/22/2007 08:48:11 AM |
| interesting composition but seems over-sharpened |
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01/22/2007 06:50:17 AM |
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