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08/25/2002 01:30:00 AM |
This is too busy for me.... 4 sjgleah |
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08/23/2002 11:04:00 PM |
the background is too busy for me. what's in the cup. I'm not sure why but it still gets a 7. :) |
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08/23/2002 10:42:00 PM |
Definitely fits the challgenge! I find it a bit too busy and that drink/sundae is just not appealing. Good imagination though... |
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08/23/2002 10:08:00 PM |
Very interesting. Definately creative. (Geesh, all those boxes of pencils!) I like how the one pencil is going opposite of the placement of the pencils on the box. Perhaps the one thing I would change would the the direction of the light - maybe. I can see some time and effort was put into this. 8 Ruthann |
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08/23/2002 02:55:00 PM |
background makes it too busy. i would like to see the shavings sharpened. |
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08/23/2002 02:12:00 AM |
the overall look of the photo is too busy |
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08/22/2002 04:58:00 PM |
Too busy, I lose track of the focal point. |
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08/22/2002 10:13:00 AM |
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08/20/2002 05:38:00 PM |
creative. I find the reflections distracting, though. Good work. |
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08/20/2002 04:54:00 PM |
Composition - very good Technical Aspects - very good Meets Challenge - yes Visual Impact / Originality – high/very good Other comments –
Jim msp
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08/20/2002 03:38:00 PM |
Depth and colors are really good. Incredibly original idea. |
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08/20/2002 11:55:00 AM |
I get the pun. good use of pencils. |
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08/20/2002 10:32:00 AM |
I like the idea and the background is clever but feels too busy for me. I don't know what to look at and where to focus. My eye can't just look around it and then settle, it's a bit too frantic for me. I do like the colours though. Kavey |
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08/20/2002 09:38:00 AM |
I love the colours in this shot; it's slightly cluttered, but it looks greatâ€Â¦ |
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08/20/2002 09:04:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background10, Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing8, Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10, Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 8, Total Averaged Rating9. Autool
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08/19/2002 10:10:00 PM |
I get the point, but I think with all the boxes, it's a little busy. I love the idea. Vocus and lighting are good. No disturbing shadows, and dealing with glass you kept the glare and reflection down nicely. It actually almost looks yummy. Almost. Great job and good luck with the challenge. |
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08/19/2002 06:24:00 PM |
YOU take the first drink! :) |
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08/19/2002 03:23:00 PM |
Fun, creative shot. What a hoot. I would of liked better lite and maybe shot more from the top. Still I like this..Score 7 ~Kee |
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08/19/2002 09:50:00 AM |
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