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11/11/2003 07:12:38 PM |
| The perspective is cool But the stuff in the background are distracting, and its a bit overexposured |
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11/11/2003 06:46:07 PM |
| This is definetely an interesting angle, I really enjoy your approach. The stuff at the end though is distracting from the overall feel of the picture, kind of throw off the balance. Good luck! |
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11/08/2003 12:41:31 PM |
| I think this picture needs a center of interest. Maybe a finger halfway down to keyboard? Other wise my attention goes to the clutter at the end of the keyboard. |
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11/06/2003 10:55:26 AM |
| cool idea, but I think it would have been better w/o the junk in the background -- and maybe focus on the closest black or white key instead of somewhere in the middle.... |
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11/06/2003 10:01:18 AM |
| IMO the angle make your shot bad. |
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11/06/2003 12:39:33 AM |
This is an awesome shot with some terrible lighting and a distracting background! If you darken the room, light the keyboard, keep the same angle, drop a cloth in front of the background stuff and you'll be right on the money. I'd like to see it if you can reshoot it! Oh big bonus because I love the originality and the shot in general!
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11/05/2003 09:59:20 PM |
| I think you could have gone very far with this photograph. Though it may be intentional on your part, I wish that the nearest black key was in focus, or more of it was in focus, a higher apeture. The blue and pinks in the back ground are distracting, I would even considering going black and white with this photograph. |
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11/05/2003 09:33:03 PM |
| DOF would have helped a bit. If the front keys were in better focus, they would have drawn the eye into the picture better. wonderful idea... I just love the piano. |
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11/05/2003 06:23:06 PM |
| I am not sure what the things at the end of the piano are, but they probably should have been removed or chopped out. Gread idea though, fits the challenge well. |
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11/05/2003 06:15:27 PM |
| may i suggest that you reangle and use a flat colour backdrop. |
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11/05/2003 05:51:29 PM |
| Not sure why you would have left in all of the background clutter... |
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11/05/2003 04:22:16 PM |
| What is happening in the top right corner ? Puzzles me whether it should add anything to the image. At the moment I find it just distracting. |
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11/05/2003 12:08:34 PM |
| Don't like the blue can and the stuff in the background. a black cloth would look better. |
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