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Challenge: Still Life (Classic Editing)
Camera: Olympus C-4040Z
Location: Indoors
Date: Nov 4, 2003
Aperture: 2.3
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/125
Galleries: Still Life, Macro
Date Uploaded: Nov 4, 2003

Several green apples and a wicked knife on a red glass plate on a wicker stool set in the light of the sun coming through a window. The black backdrop is actually the kitchen oven. Shot in macro mode on a tripod.

Statistics
Place: 47 out of 326
Avg (all users): 5.9206
Avg (commenters): 7.2143
Avg (participants): 5.9930
Avg (non-participants): 5.8257
Views since voting: 919
Votes: 252
Comments: 16
Favorites: 0


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11/11/2003 10:36:15 PM
Great pic. I'll elaborate about what I like and don't like. This is a very intersting concept and very well executed except for the shadows. In my opinion, they crowd the shot too much, and they definitely make weird designs that detract the viewer's attention from the knife. Also, this photo doesn't need that red dish (? i think it's a dish) at all. Zoom in, crop things out, and be bold with your statement of green, silver, and black.
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11/11/2003 07:20:50 PM
I think you could have soften the lightning a little, its a bit harsh on the areas where it comes on, But I like how the shadows split in half on the apples
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11/11/2003 06:44:19 PM
very nice, I love the silver of the knife against the green apples. Wish the handle was included at the bottom right, and the apple slice is a bit blown out.
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11/11/2003 05:59:13 PM
Very good work overall; just watch exposure; apples have hot spots.
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11/11/2003 09:45:31 AM
Love the contruction, colour contrasts, highlights seem blown-out on my monitor.
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11/09/2003 06:29:59 PM
I find the lighting a little too harsh, with too many overexposed patches on the left of the fruit.
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11/08/2003 08:04:57 PM
Nice shot. Good lighting and composition. I like the color combinations. 8.
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11/06/2003 09:11:56 PM
Nice comp, unfortunately has hot spots that detract. Great concept and worth working on.
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11/06/2003 07:33:14 AM
love the composition, but think that the side lighting is too harsh. Theres a weird light artifact on the bottom left hand side too from the glass table. But one of my faves so far!
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11/05/2003 09:52:05 PM
Little fried on the left.....still I like this shot. The texture of the knife handle the basket weave...all good. The whole shot is very pleasing. Good luck I hope this does well. I sure like it.
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11/05/2003 08:14:38 PM
Clarity is great. Sure to finish on top. The green apples against the steel is a nice contrast. Very good.
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11/05/2003 12:19:54 PM
very nice... I just wish that the thing the apples are on didn't have that red pattern, just plain black or other dark color would probably be less distracting... but I really like the composition and lighting.
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11/05/2003 12:11:22 PM
The light is too harsh, but I like the composition and the subject matter. Also I think I would have like to have seen the rest of the knife in the frame.
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11/05/2003 09:43:04 AM
now That's a Knife.
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11/05/2003 07:49:06 AM
nice idea
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11/05/2003 12:26:27 AM
Great shot, the border went a bit south on you I'm afraid. The light seems just a bit hard on my monitor but I like the over-all composition.
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