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Oh dear! Oh dear! I shall be too late!
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Challenge: Motion Panning II (Basic Editing)
Collection: 2007
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF 135mm f/2.0L USM
Location: Amsterdam
Date: Jan 12, 2007
Aperture: f11.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/30
Galleries: Transportation
Date Uploaded: Jan 12, 2007

Could be a little sharper, but I still like it. Donīt like the graffity, but you can hardly see trains here without it. (And I donīt want it to edit it away).

Shooted in raw, rotated (should I've done this?), noise reduction, level adjustment, curves, resized and sharpenend.

Statistics
Place: 43 out of 131
Avg (all users): 5.7690
Avg (commenters): 6.0667
Avg (participants): 5.5000
Avg (non-participants): 5.8242
Views since voting: 1135
Views during voting: 476
Votes: 329
Comments: 16
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/23/2007 03:56:30 PM
Great Visual!
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01/22/2007 04:45:23 AM
I would have liked to have seen a little more of the train as i think the contrast in colors would work well against the dark background.
but a good effort none the less.
good luck
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01/21/2007 09:09:21 AM
A longer pan and more of the train would really help this shot.
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01/20/2007 11:51:10 PM
nice set up for the title. 6
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01/20/2007 10:01:58 PM
yes, you met the challenge. just wish you had about another 20% of the frame filled with the subject, though.
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01/20/2007 01:36:48 AM
While your technique appears to be sound, the train is cropped too much. I would have used the rule of thirds to balance off the composition.
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01/19/2007 06:47:27 PM
Nice job, but I think more of the train would have been better.
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01/19/2007 10:14:51 AM
Excellent title and the photo is very much in the spirit of a work-a-day image. Nice work. 8.
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01/18/2007 09:30:13 AM
Not enough subject, too much environment.
Good job of stopping motion. Little too much sharpen (jaggies)
Nice colors on Train. Rest of image is really dull and take a lot away.
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01/18/2007 06:15:34 AM
It's good but it doesn't show enough of the train. If you can get at least one set of wheels in the shot it might help to give more sense of structure to the train.
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01/17/2007 09:37:17 PM
Image quality - .5. Composition - .5. Lighting - 1. Post Processing - 1. Choice of Subject - 1. TOTAL SCORE - 4
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01/17/2007 03:04:12 PM
How very odd. The train would appear to be heading in the direction of the blur, which fits with the title but is sort of contrary to the idea of eyes following objects and blurs remaining in their wake. Gotta have 6 for getting the engine so pin-sharp though.
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01/17/2007 01:47:08 PM
Good effect but I wish I could see a little bit more of a train
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01/17/2007 01:26:06 PM
nice capture, when you stare at this it makes you feel as though you are also on a moving train.
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01/17/2007 01:26:06 AM
Very clear.
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01/17/2007 12:25:45 AM
Works well, but I'd like to have seen just a little more of the train. With the drab coloured background it doesn't make for the most exciting of images.
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