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11/11/2003 10:55:19 PM |
| You certainly did capture the color and tone of the old masters. A little too bright on the orange or this would have been 10 for me |
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11/11/2003 08:05:07 PM |
| Very nice but IMO needs to be sharper |
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11/11/2003 03:00:00 PM |
| nice. love the vibrant colors and the harsh lighting. can see this as a oil painting. the crop is a bit tight though. |
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11/10/2003 07:54:16 PM |
| I like the objects you chose, especially the opened pomegranate. But I think the arrangement is somewhat lacking. I think it would be better if more of the corn was visible and if there were more than 2 levels (the fruit and the corn). Perhaps moving the pomegranate in front of the other fruit would help in both respects. |
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11/10/2003 07:43:19 PM |
| You have such a grasp of color in this picture that I could kiss you. Thank you for restoring my faith in color, in texture (there's something about fruit on a wood table that's timeless, no?), and in the potential of photographers on this site to capture such design elements. |
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11/10/2003 11:53:52 AM |
| Lighting and colour is good, somehow the composition seems too flat. |
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11/08/2003 12:38:08 PM |
| theres some great tones here, and is a lovely composition. The only criticism I'd have is that the lighting is a little harsh on the lemon. 8 |
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11/07/2003 09:14:59 PM |
| Lovely colors and lighting. |
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11/07/2003 07:55:57 PM |
| nice...like the contrast and colors |
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11/06/2003 10:49:22 PM |
| Nice concept but maybe a bit dark. Can't make out the object to left of pomagranite. |
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11/06/2003 03:59:30 PM |
This composition is a little 'flat' for lack of a better term. The lighting is good but you are over exposed in the highlights! I think that if you moved the camera up from the table some you would get a little more depth and more impact! I do really like the reflections on the table top itself!
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11/05/2003 06:07:41 PM |
| harsh lighting. lemon got overexposed... making the lighting more even and diffused would help. might also find a different way to arrange them so that they arent all laying in a straight line across the center of the frame. |
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11/05/2003 11:13:46 AM |
| I like the composition, but it's way overexposed (mostly the lemon). I think this could have been corrected by using more ambient light from the room in which the shot was taken. |
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11/05/2003 09:28:43 AM |
| I really enjoy your angle here! The lighting and composition is quite good! |
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