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'Unwritten'
'Unwritten'
Wellylena


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Challenge: Song Titles, 2006 (Advanced Editing V*)
Camera: Nikon D50
Location: in my music room
Date: Jan 9, 2007
Aperture: 5.7
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Still Life
Date Uploaded: Jan 9, 2007

v. last minute. considering my last two scores, i'm not expecting a high one here. ah well, one can but try. i am now realy cross we threw away the old metronome! had to make do with my bbrother's bugle instead. quite pleased with how it turned out

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Place: 62 out of 219
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Votes: 292
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01/23/2007 04:33:47 PM
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, I really likewhat you are doing here. The only things I might suggest are to move the horn down in the frame a bit more. Right now, it just looks like an ornate piece of metal, and you don't really get the feeling of it being a musical instrument. Also, and this is probably just the music major in me, a pen would have seemed more realistic to me for some reason. I assume most writers do their initial stuff in pencil, but a pen just seems a bit more "artistic." Again, that may just be me.

Technically, the focus is good and the exposure is good, though I think a bit more light overall would help the details be a bit more visible.

Overall, I think you had a nice shot here. It met the challenge, I believe, and has a nice storytelling quality about it.

If I need to further clarify or explain, please do not hesitate to contact me.

karmat
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/16/2007 07:08:32 PM
i like this. Especially the choice of using the music paper rather than just regular type.
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01/15/2007 01:16:23 PM
I like this photo. 1.Great tonality, 2.matches the title well and 3.imparts mood. Well done!
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01/14/2007 08:52:49 PM
this is a great idea for this challenge. it could be a bit brighter, but good job!
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01/13/2007 02:53:55 AM
A bit too literal?
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01/11/2007 09:17:10 PM
This is such a powerful composition... full of potential! I especially like the color!
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01/11/2007 10:43:59 AM
Nice idea. Although I would have like to have seen more of the instrument, to make the connection between the staff paper and the music more apparent. Also, I think I would have preferred to remove the colour cast and leave the paper more crisply white - more 'unwritten'.
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01/10/2007 08:29:58 AM
love the lighting!
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01/10/2007 12:43:40 AM
it's not unwritten... it's just 4'33" by john cage ;-)
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