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01/16/2007 04:56:17 PM |
Want my honest opinion?
Love it well done :-) Nice tonal qualities. Interesting person (and pretty I might add).Good control of natural lighting.
This might sound kinda corny, but I do believe she is on the wrong side of the tracks. Compositionally with the tilt of her head and angle of her body I think having the tacks to the right side of the frame would have been more interesting. |
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01/15/2007 05:02:44 PM |
| The background just doesn't work. The tracks coming out of her shoulder are wrong. On the other hand, nice, crisp portrait contrasting with blurred background. Almost... |
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01/14/2007 09:18:39 AM |
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01/12/2007 11:58:41 AM |
| Nice photo. Friendly. I keep wanting to go down the tracks and see what is around the bend, though. Maybe a tad less DOF would have avoided that distraction and make your model pop out more? - 6 |
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01/11/2007 04:26:11 AM |
| slightly too smoothed, nice backlight, appealing smile and face, background too distracting (maybe greater DoF next time?), has overall potential. |
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01/10/2007 07:11:15 PM |
| The curves on this photo were very well done - Good lights and darks. Nice expression. |
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01/10/2007 01:59:15 PM |
| It looks to me like a higher crop on the bottom would have made this a more flattering portrait of the subject, without losing the nice effect of those railroad tracks in the background. I love the lighting, though. |
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01/10/2007 07:14:24 AM |
| I believe I recognize this particular train track. Maybe the model should have turned more toward the track. Good dof. |
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