First submission. Just used shadow/highlight in PS for contrast. Healing brush to remove hard lines under eyes. Highlights/shadows to soften up. Cropped and saved.
This is my daughter. I was taking a picture of something else and she jumped in front of the lense.
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Eyes, they are beautiful but not doing much for me becouse; of the crop, more face would had been much better. It's also a bit grainy, too hig ISO maby ?
I understand that many like the extreme close up composition, so this is entirely subjective. But I can see nothing of the character of the person you've tried to capture.
I think this lacks detail - perhaps it has been cropped down so much that detail has been lost? I'd like to see more detail, contrast, and sharpness in the eyes.
While eyes are certainly an engaging subject, youre missing some essential elements here. Sharper focus and a more dramatic B&W conversion would bring alot more interest to this shot. Ive given this a 2, but I encourage you to try this a few more times and see if you can improve your result.
only eyes? this should be a much sharper image then. Also, for the future, this frame size NEVER does well on DPC. Also, the shot looks like it's floating. A good way of grounding it would be by giving it a border.