It seems a little blurry around the top of his head, but that could be because of the blue shadow. It's an appropriate image for the halloween challenge. The lighting looks ok, and other than the white in the lower right corner that could probably have been cropped out, the composition is ok too.
Very cool, the eyeball is really gross! ;) The blue effect on the shot is very helpful to the shot and the overall composition is well done, a good balance between the web in the back and the monster. An 8 to start
you really capture the essence of Frank. I sense the jutxtaposition of his need to live and his displeasure with his varicose facial veins. and stuff. that and he looks hungry. his body language suggests a subway roast chicken sub on parmesan oregano with chipotle sauce would be ideal.
:D