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11/11/2003 02:16:04 PM |
| In simple terms, this is just an unappealing shot. The dirty stove and burner may have some artistic significance to you but to me, it just looks like a dirty stove and burner. The shadow off the the left doesn't bother me, in fact I think it works better than if you had left the area completely white. Composition is ok. |
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11/11/2003 01:35:14 PM |
| I'd like it more if I knew what the yellow thing was. This is actually pretty good; I'm gonna knock it up a point because I like how you had the capacity to place the subject off-center. |
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11/08/2003 03:44:14 PM |
| Clean your stove, please! Sorry, the grime is distracting to me. |
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11/06/2003 11:31:25 AM |
The shadow on the left of the stove looks bad
The dirt on the white part of the stove is distracting and looks messy
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11/06/2003 12:46:12 AM |
I don't know what you are trying to say here. A dirty stovetop isn't the most interesting subject and the shadow on the left is distracting.
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11/05/2003 10:04:30 PM |
| I lke the offset- style composition. |
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11/05/2003 05:45:04 PM |
| nice - took me a second. i wish there was no shadow creeping in on the left side though. and maybe the lid oculd have been centered just a little more with a nudge to the right on the element. |
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