I feel that there is too much white-isch sky in your image. Also you have a high contrast throughout your image, which should bring out the dark fencepoles better, but the first one doesn't pop out against it mixed background. I know that this sound like a contrast to my previous statement of too much white. But if you wanted to go for the white sky, go for it all the way, so kneel when taking this shot and get also this first pole against the sky and not the ground. Or don't go for it at all. In the last case, a better dof, here small focused area would help bring out the poles against a very blurry background or maybe color - non color would have been better to bring them out of the buzzy background.
nice - blown horizon/sky works great in this image which isn't always easy to pull off | love the composition & framing | more detail & a hair more tone (just a hair!) would have been nice as it is lacking crispness for me << 8 >>