I like the moment - I would, it has similarities with my own entry - but I must say I hate your border: it makes the tonality in the actual image difficult to assess by emphasising that colour in the image. The definition in the water is fine, but one would perhaps like more contrast around the birds, a touch more detail.
Nice shot, in my humble opinion, I would have eliminated the border. The color is just a bit off and I found it distracting. However, I do like the photo very much.