yeah focus on the lady is wayy to soft. And that shadow going across their chest is really distracting. i love the soft brown color tone to the shot tho, really seems to fit this scene. But darn it, just with she was in focus.....
Focus seems a little soft. I would like a crisp portrait here. I also think I would like both people looking at me. You have some nice work in your portfolio and I think you made it to the best site.