My monitor may not be the best for critiquing on; however this image has a yellowish cast on my screen. For me, the crop feels a bit tight. It also seems like the boy guarding is fairly out of focus. The shot might be a bit more interesting if his face were visible and in focus. The other boy is pretty sharp, but his pose and expression aren't very dynamic for an action shot. Definitely a difficult atmosphere for photography. I'll leave it to the pros to tell you how to make it better.
Message edited by author 2007-03-29 12:12:11. |
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