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11/05/2003 07:16:00 AM |
| thanks a lot for your helpful comments! |
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11/04/2003 07:19:12 PM |
| very nice approach to challenge, focus good, light a little harsh/blown out on forehead and cheekbone but good emotion 7 |
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11/04/2003 12:51:36 PM |
| too bad there are such sharp highlights on the woman. |
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11/04/2003 11:00:12 AM |
| An idea very well executed - the composition is definately a strong point. I like the use of black and white. There are some slight distractions with a few small bright spots throughout the image, but without spot editing, this would be hard to remove. |
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11/03/2003 05:51:01 PM |
| Why did you use a flash? It washes the details and brightens exaggeratedly the skin. It's a good idea, and expressions are perfect, but more attention to the lighting (coming from the side, or above, or from different points) would have led to something more gracious. |
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11/03/2003 03:33:39 AM |
| Very good shot, and I love the B&W! :-) |
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11/03/2003 03:02:17 AM |
| the lighting reflecting off their skin (teeth and eyes also) ruins this a bit for me. perhaps with more subtle, softer lighting. |
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11/02/2003 08:26:33 PM |
| Nice feeling to your picture but the subjects appear almost oily the way the light is reflecting off their faces. |
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11/02/2003 01:53:39 AM |
| A sweet picture. Wish it had been natural light... |
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11/01/2003 10:32:50 PM |
| This is such a nice concept to communicate! Bravo! Your close-up point of view works here. I strongly suspect that had you used natural light, the image's tonal range would have more depth, and this marvelously graceful couple would look a bit more natural. Try shooting them again (they're worth it!) on a bright day, but in the shade. |
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11/01/2003 01:20:22 PM |
| Excellent pic. I would have taken the shine away though, before submitting it. Great pic though! |
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10/31/2003 05:14:10 PM |
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10/31/2003 01:47:12 PM |
theme : 1/3
lighting: 2/3
overall quality: 2/4 |
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10/31/2003 12:45:14 AM |
| It deserves a ten for making me feel so wonderful. :) |
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10/30/2003 10:24:32 AM |
| The lighting is a bit harsh here, I think less contrast would help this image more. |
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10/29/2003 11:53:33 PM |
the faces, their expressions and composition (faces filling the frames, looking in different directions, not at the camera) are all very nice. you get the sense that these are real people, reflecting on their lives...
this could be a really nice photo. but it needs 2 things (in my opinion): natural light, and not quite so sharp(ened).
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10/29/2003 08:11:40 PM |
| This is a lovely portrait; I can excuse the rather far-fetched relationship to the challenge subject. I'm a bit bothered by the hot spots; a more diffused lighting might have made this a really outstanding portrait. |
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10/29/2003 05:52:56 PM |
| good definition. good crop, |
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10/29/2003 05:15:10 PM |
| Nice composition, I think a softer light might have been good here. The reflections and shine of the skin seems distractive here. |
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10/29/2003 08:35:55 AM |
| This is a nice shot of this couple but, if they're posed and knowing they're getting their picture taken, dapple their faces with some light powder to take away that shine. They look like they're sweating profusely and it is a terrible distraction. I also think cropping the gentleman's face so close to the border so that his cheek seems cut off should be reconsidered. I love the concept within the challenge theme and with a little tweaking, this would be a great shot. |
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10/29/2003 01:34:57 AM |
| This is precious, and the title is perfect, both are gracefu; I like the choice of choosing the black and white for this picture it seems to fit perfectly, great job |
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