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10/29/2003 10:01:02 PM |
| Thanks to everyone who viewed my submission... The comments are extremely useful to me as a novice photographer. |
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10/28/2003 10:55:35 PM |
| Nice use of negative space! |
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10/27/2003 04:23:45 PM |
| Nice contrasts in this image. I do think the white is a bit harsh - I'd like it better if it was a little toned down. That said, it really sets off the subject, both her skin tone and the black burqua?. I like the long look of the photo, but would prefer it cropped a little, I think it would still hold its length well. Good composition, the girl looks alone and has a sadness to her that I can easily equate with isolation and solitude. Nice job. 7 |
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10/24/2003 06:18:57 PM |
| Interesting take on the challenge, I really like the compositions. 7 |
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10/24/2003 01:26:20 PM |
| The positioning of the subject doesn't really work for me. There is just too much empty space in the photo. Clearly that was your intent so maybe it's just over my head. (no pun intended) |
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10/23/2003 11:30:41 AM |
| Too much of background, but the contrast between black and white is a neat idea. |
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10/22/2003 09:36:42 PM |
| If only the focus was a bit sharper... |
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10/22/2003 08:53:37 PM |
| too much space at top but still nice photo |
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10/22/2003 07:24:45 PM |
| This is a very powerful image, both in its visual impact and with the title you have given it. Lovely face, and the only suggestion I might have would be to crop a bit off the top...9 |
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10/22/2003 03:56:47 PM |
| Good use of negative space, I like this picture for its simplicity. Only two elements I would have improved, the blow out of the upper right corner and the indented line of the architecture on the left. I think I would have cropped proportionately from the top and left side to avoid the angled indentation – while still maintaining as much negative space and the proportions of the picture as possible. |
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10/22/2003 09:22:16 AM |
| I liked your picture, but I wish her face was clearer, it's a little out of focus. |
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