unfortunately you chose the worst kind of light here.... the typical problem with deciding where to measure the exposition; underexposed foreground and overexposed background... But, bedides the technical matter, I think this is a very nice picture, though it is quite a common composition. it gives a good sense of being alone and I hope it will be among the best rated. Good luck.
Nice work. The contrast between inside and out really brings a lonely feeling to the girl looking out. Wishing she could be a part of the outside world. A little rotation could have straightened the pic out and made the crookedness a little less distracting. 7