Hmmm, interesting subject. I don't think there is enough focus on the edges of the papers. Most of the picture is blurry, and the areas that are in focus don't really do much ... i.e. it doesn't bring your focus to a specific object of the picture. Also, I see a lot of noise in the picture, and that also takes away from the picture.
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