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10/27/2003 03:22:30 PM			 | 
		
		Originally posted by Flash:  6. Another version might talk to me more.  Perhaps a focused flashlight beam. Or sidelighted by a candle. |   
 
 I did actually use a candle. It's noted in the notes. |  
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10/26/2003 11:02:49 PM			 | 
		
		| I'm not sure exactly what kind of effect you are going for here, but this photo really doesn't do much for me.. |  
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10/26/2003 07:33:14 PM			 | 
		
		| 6. Another version might talk to me more.  Perhaps a focused flashlight beam. Or sidelighted by a candle. |  
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10/23/2003 12:49:30 AM			 | 
		
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10/22/2003 09:42:09 PM			 | 
		
		| I hope you don't read in that light! :)  Your poor eyes!   Okay, just kidding but the light does seem rather dark for reading and if it was bumped up a notch it would really add to the shot for me.  I like the subject matter you chose, very nice considering the recent breaking of some rule, even if by accident, myself being one of them! ;)  My first impression was a 3 vote, after coming back and looking more closely I'm going to a 6 for now, may be back again. |  
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10/20/2003 06:53:24 PM			 | 
		
		| The focus is pretty good - I would've liked the first few lines in that first paragraph all to be in focus then start blending out.  I wish the lighting was a bit brighter as well, BUT I do like the fact that it is lighting only a portion of the writing and tapers off.  The subject/composition doesn't hold my attention very long - I find it a little dry, a little color to spice things up may have helped, maybe a red circle around 'read the rules' or something similar.  Just an idea.  All in all I gave it a 5 |  
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